I find it cool when people are interested in discovering something new. Is it grammatically correct?
yes :)
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But, we have already born with some character and personality.
have already been born
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lifesaver
Give 20 points!
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star
Double points!
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rocket
Go to first place!
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banana
Go to last place!
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For instance, your child can get acquainted to odd people which can steal money or even hurt the child.
who
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All in all, there are 7.9 billion of people and no one is the same, we all have different bodies, characters, and personalities.
correct :)
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thief
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fairy
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fairy
Take points!
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baam
Lose 20 points!
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For example: one child have been crying for 2 hours after he/she was born, but another haven't cried at all.
was crying, didn't cry
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eraser
Reset score!
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gold
Win 50 points!
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fairy
Take points!
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banana
Go to last place!
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All in all, in my opinion, children who are below the age of 12 have to be prevented to use the internet and the social networks, because it has a lot of people or content that can cause some troubles.
prevented from using
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Today more and more young people are using social networking websites Today more and more young people are using social networking websites and a lot of children too.
Today more and more young people are using social networking websites and a lot of children are too.
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I guess everyone have a laid back friend and you will agree with me that you definitely can not count on him or her.
has, laid-back
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"Of course that is all relatively", "In friendship everything is individually". Think about the appropriate usage of parts of speech?
relative, individual
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"I can not stand being without work, I always busy as a bee." and "They are not ideal but I trying to make them that way. "