Read the two excerpts. Which one uses a more appropriate tone for a formal report? A) โI think this idea is kinda cool and might actually work.โ B) โThis approach shows potential and may prove effective in practice.โ
B
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What does it mean for 'tone' and 'style' to be appropriate?
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Does this show good cohesion?โFirstly, the team prepared the field. Then, they set up the equipment. In addition, they checked the weather forecast before starting.โ
Yes: Firstly, In addition etc
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Which word in this sentence is more precise or interesting than a basic alternative? โThe performer captivated the audience with her stunning voice.โ
captivated
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Identify and rewrite the sentence to make it more concise: โIn my opinion, I think that the film was really very boring and not interesting at all.โ
Tautology: boring and not interesting
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What is meant by 'coherence' in writing and why is it important?
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Where should punctuation marks be added in this sentence? โJohn who had never been to Paris before was excited to see the Eiffel Towerโ
John, who had never been to Paris before, was excited to see the Eiffel Tower.
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What is a topic sentence and where is it usually found?
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Which of the following is a topic sentence? A) The moon was full and bright. B) There are several reasons why space travel fascinates people. C) It was late at night, and all the lights were off.
B
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shark
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banana
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What does 'cohesion' mean and give 3 linking words that contribute to it.