Use nominalisation: Fair trade coffee farmers in Colombia earn 32% more than non-certified farmers, helping them afford education and healthcare.
The increased earnings of fair trade coffee farmers in Colombia, compared to non-certified farmers, contribute to greater access to education and healthcare.
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Use passive voice: Fair trade coffee farmers in Colombia earn 32% more than non-certified farmers, helping them afford education and healthcare.
Example solution: Thirty-two percent more is earned by fair trade coffee farmers in Colombia than by non-certified farmers, allowing them to afford education an
