He was alone. In the roaring plane with no pilot he was alone. Alone.
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His stomach tightened into a series of rolling knots.
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The pilot nodded. "All of flying is easy. Just takes learning. Like everything else. Like everything else."
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Be asleep, his mind screamed at the pilot.
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Then the bird started again, and some kind of buzzing insect, and then a chattering and a cawing.
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And now a jolt took him like a hammerblow.
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The plane slewed suddenly to the right.
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Hisses and blurks, small sounds, birds singing, hum of insects, splashes from the fish jumpingโ
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baam
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banana
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Either way he would probably be home by late night or early morning, home where he could sit down and eat a large, cheesy, juicy burger with tomatoes and double fries with ketchup and a thick chocolate shake.
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It was as if his hands and arms were as heavy as lead.
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He ripped at it until it released and somehowโthe water trying to kill him, to end himโ
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It was a clear, blue-sky day with fluffy bits of clouds here and there.