Remember expressions we use to make a contrast.

How many paras do we write?

Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Is your writing organised into clear paragraphs? 2. Have you included linking words to connect your ideas?

Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Are the words you used what is expected at your level? 2. Did you use basic grammar successfully and use harder ones like passives and conditionals?

Paraphrase + your opinion: Do you agree that community service works better than fines?

Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Have you included all the points from the question in your notes? 2. Is your writing too long/short?

Paraphrase + your opinion: Online education is very important nowadays.

Paraphrase + your opinion: Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?

Remember expressions we use to add new idea.

Find mistakes and make it more complex: In my opinion, teenagers shouldn’t teach other people about things, which they know very bad, they ought to teach other people and help them with things which they know good.

What should we include in Para 1?

In conclusion, All in all, To sum up. Why do you use this expressions?