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Apart from the aims and structure of the essay what else could be included in a thesis statement?
The writer's opinion
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Change the following to a more impersonal style: In this essay, I will discuss ......
This essay will discuss
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How could you make this sound more formal? This is a great way to get rid of the problem
Suggestion: This would be an effective solution to the problem.
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Link these sentences together: People in rural areas are affected by this problem. A large number of them do not have access to the internet.
as / because People in rural areas are affected by this problem as / because a large number of them do not have access to the internet.
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Linkers: ___________ it seems to be a relatively simple solution, it will take many years to implement.
Although / Even though
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What's missing: This solution is effective because can be implemented quickly and at a low cost.
the subject after because:This solution is effective because it can be implemented quickly and at a low cost
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lifesaver
Give 5 points!
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gold
Win 50 points!
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gift
Win 10 points!
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banana
Go to last place!
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seesaw
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seesaw
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fairy
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baam
Lose 25 points!
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Name 3 things you should include in the introduction
Hook / background information / general to specific information / support from reading / thesis statement
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How could you start a thesis statement for a problem solution essay?
This essay will discuss two problems related to (........) and measures that can be taken to alleviate these problems will be provided and evaluated)
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What's missing:"In the UK, online purchases have increased by 20% in just the last 18 months."
Evidence - When quoting factual information you must include a reference. (Office for National Statistics, 2020)
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What's wrong? There are 2 errors: The one problem associated with the physical shops is their high running costs.
"The" is not needed: One problem associated with physical shops is their high running costs.
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Change the following to a more impersonal style, using the passive: I will show that ......
It will be shown that.....
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baam
Lose 10 points!
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seesaw
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shark
Other team loses 15 points!
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baam
Lose 25 points!
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Make one sentence: This method will leave no traces. This is very concerning for users of online banking.
This method will leave no traces which is very concerning for users of online banking.
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What should you include in the conclusion? Name 3 things (there are 4 in total).
refer to the thesis statement or aims, make a suggestion or recommendation, make predictions about the future, summarise the main points of the essay
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